Monday, October 24, 2016

Take Another Look

New picture books help young readers look at the world around them in different ways.

The Lost House
By B. B. Cronin
Seek and find books are not difficult to find – ironic isn’t it? However I recently read what I can only describe as a diamond among the cubic zirconia. The Lost House is much more than a seek and find book. It’s an illustrative tour de force.

Grandad has promised to take his two grandchildren (all anthropomorphic bulldogs) to the park. Before they can leave Grandad needs to find a few things – socks, glasses, pocket watch, umbrella, and even his teeth. Do you think they’ll find everything? You should probably help. Be aware, each room and everything in it appears in one bold color. The rooms are packed full of whimsy, eccentricity and household items. The Lost House is beautifully crafted and so visually engaging even older children will want to help find the lost items.

What’s good: Incredibly detailed illustrations that appeal to both young and old.
What’s bad: The palette of room colors can be a little jarring at times.

The Alphabet from the Sky
By Benedikt Groß & Joey Lee
Ever look out of the window of a plane to see the landscape below? Ever play the alphabet game? Now you can do both in this single book. Using satellite imagery the geographer and designer duo of Benedikt Groß & Joey Lee found “accidental letters” in the landscapes across the United States. From holding ponds to highways, from suburbs to fields, children will find the locations and formations very interesting and wonder what letter their neighborhood might hide. Each image spread includes an inset with the town’s location pinpointed on a map and map coordinates. The Alphabet from the Sky began as an MIT project and Kickstarter campaign. Now it’s a picture book that is perfect for the classroom.

What’s good: It encourages children to look at things from new angles.
What’s bad: Probably more intriguing to adults.

Monday, October 17, 2016

5 Mistakes to Avoid when Self-Publishing

[Originally published 3/3/09 as 3 Deadly Mistakes of Self-Publishing Picture Books. Revisited and revised 10/13/16.]

There are five basic mistakes writers who self-publish children’s books make more often than not. These five mistakes can kill a good idea and lead a writer to publish something that should never have been allowed in print. The truly amazing thing is the author never sees the literary atrocity they have committed. Like a new parent, their child is the most beautiful baby in the world. 

When I originally wrote this article in 2009 I cut to the point, only referenced 3 Mistakes, and focused on picture books. At that time I neglected to inform you that, as a writer and editor, I have been on both sides of this issue. Avoiding these mistakes will make any children’s book better. This article is not intended to be an insult to aspiring writers, editors or publishing houses. It is intended to be a wake-up call. As writers and editors we need to open our eyes to simplicity.  

The last seven years have seen a proliferation of tools, online publishers and distribution channels designed to feed into our vanity and make it easy for anyone to publish a book. There is absolutely nothing wrong with that – we should all be storytellers. But let’s avoid the worst and most common mistakes by knowing the problems before we pick up a pen or open a laptop.
  1. Illustrations — Great illustrations can make bad books readable and turn good books into family favorites. Although it has gotten better in the last seven years, self-published books still tend to have timid and amateurish illustrations. This automatically gives the impression that your book isn’t on the same level as the major publishers’ books. Poor illustration quality will effectively doom your story no matter how good the writing is.
  2. Overindulgence — I call this one verbal gluttony because we writers say too much. We are usually too close to our own work to see the flaws and make necessary edits. Some online publishers will provide editors, but generally speaking, the writer is king when it comes to self-publishing. What a writer wants on the page stays on the page. Verbal gluttony tends to lead to See and Say books that never involve or engage readers. It’s a big killer for picture books. Great picture books include the reader in a conversation. Ideally the writer offers enough
    information to entice readers, the illustrator adds new information to bring ideas into focus, and the reader completes the conversation with their own thoughts and interpretations. Overindulgence only leads to a bloated, slothful story that is a chore to read. 
  3. Illustrations — Did I say illustrations earlier? Well there’s more. Stop playing See and Say! Visuals should add to and accentuate the text, not repeat it. And if you can create the setting in an illustration, don’t do it in the text. The See and Say approach slows the pacing of your story and bores the reader. Engaging illustrations that enhance your writing and an economical use of words will encourage children to keep reading and make connections with the story.
  4. Design and Layout — Font selection and art direction make a big difference in a book’s readability. The flow of a story through its pages is highly important for reader engagement. Does the layout encourage a natural page turn? Does a reader know where the next line of text is located? If the illustrations, the font and the layout are competing, the answers will be resounding nos. Readers will get confused and the story’s flow and pacing will be interrupted. As a book reviewer I see this problem – in all levels of publishing. So test the layout many times, if possible.
  5. Illiteracy  Read. Read often. And read some more. Everyone has a story to tell, but far too many would-be children’s book authors never actually read children’s books. There are many different styles and genres – reading current books will help you understand what current readers expect from those styles and genres. I can’t tell you how many books I have read that appear to have been written by someone who has never read a children’s book. You may know your story better than anyone else, but understanding how children will read it is the key to telling it in a way they will accept.

Read. Write. Edit. Illustrate. Most self-publishing authors can do one or two of these well. It’s unlikely you can do all of them as well as you need to in order to put together a great book. If you are reading this you are probably writing a book. You’re a writer, so focus on reading and writing in your chosen genre. Hire a good editor and a good illustrator to handle the rest. 

Wednesday, October 12, 2016

Books You May Have Missed that Are Worth Reading

12 Recently Published Books that Deserve a Second Look

I was recently told that parents don't read book reviews for their children's books. They want to know about new gadgets and gizmos that make their parenting lives easier. Well... I'm here to say books are the original gadget. A good book can calm a crying baby, entertain a bored toddler, teach a reluctant youth, safely give preteens and teens the adventures they crave, and offer a bonding experience for parents and kids off all ages. With all of that in mind I have picked a dozen books you and your children may have overlooked throughout the past year – but they definitely are worth reading.

Best for Ages 3 - 7 

The Little Snowplow
By Lora Koehler | Illustrated by Jake Parker 
 If you crossed Mike Mulligan and His Steam Shovel with Katy and the Big Snow, you’d come pretty close to this fun tale from debut author Lora Koehler. The Little Snowplow follows a small blue snowplow as he joins the big trucks of the Mighty Mountain Road Crew. The seasoned crew questions the little guy’s abilities, which just motivates him to train more.

This wonderful tale of hard work and perseverance also covers humility and forgiveness.  The Little Snowplow will make a good addition to story time collections containing Little Toot and The Little Engine that Could.
What’s good: Children will love the action and friendly illustrations.                       

            Grumpy Bird
            By Jeremy Tankard
            This adorable board book is all about finding the fun in every day life. Bird discovers that waking up on the wrong side of the bed doesn’t have to dictate how the rest of your day proceeds. When Bird wakes up grumpy he’s in no mood to eat, play or even fly. Instead, he starts walking. Before long Bird meets Sheep who decides to join him on the walk. Why? Because Sheep thinks walks are nice. This goes on and on – Rabbit, Fox and others join Bird. Pretty soon walking turns into playing with friends and Bird realizes he’s not grumpy anymore. That’s the power of friendship.
            What's good: Illustrations that will engage and entertain toddlers.

Please Say Please!
By Kyle T. Webster
            What’s the magic word? In this lively new picture book
from Kyle T. Webster the word is “Please.” When you want
something how do you get it? Do you shout and say I want?
Or, do you show some manners and ask nicely? On the first
page of this book a young girl begins by shouting “I want a
fish.” When an older gentleman says “Please say please and
I’ll grant any wish,” she changes her tune. This happens over
and over again – parents will relate to that – until the girl
finally gets the hang of using her manners and nicely asks
for a giant.|
The text is short and flows nicely. The illustrations are highly engaging –the characters are a retro black and white, but the background scenes are bright
and lively. 
            What's good: Focused on one word, the lesson is easy and entertaining.

            The Lost House
            By B. B. Cronin
            Seek and find books are easy to find – ironic isn’t it? I recently read a lost and found book I can only describe as a hidden treasure. The Lost House is an illustrative tour de force. Grandad has promised to take his two grandchildren (all anthropomorphic bulldogs) to the park. Before they can leave Grandad needs to find a few things – socks, glasses, pocket watch, umbrella, and even his teeth. They may never find everything, so you need to help. Be aware, each room and everything in it appears in one bold color. The rooms are packed full of whimsy, eccentricity and household items. The Lost House is beautifully crafted and so visually engaging even older children will want to help find the lost items.
            What's good: Detailed illustrations that will appeal to curious people everywhere.

Best for Ages 8 - 12

Fortune Falls
By Jenny Goebel
            What would you do if you were born into a town where everything was decided by luck? Those of you who are lucky might find easy success. But what happens if you are unlucky? Sadie was born in Fortune Falls. She is smart, loyal to family and friends and very brave. But as her luck test approaches nothing seems to go her way. And, if she fails the test they’ll send her away so she won’t endanger those around her. Fortune Falls explores both good and bad luck while digging into friendships, ghost stories and family dynamics. Can a girl change or create her own luck? You decide after you read this humorous adventure in superstition.
            What's good: Intriguing plot with a well-developed, likable hero.

Click Here to Start                                                                     
By Denis Markell          

Have you ever played an “escape the room” game? For those of you who haven't, think brain teaser and scavenger hunt rolled into one mysterious game. This is the engine that propels the narrative development of Click Here to Start.

Ted Gerson, is a half Jewish, half Japanese-American boy living in La Purisma, 
California. He loves “escape the room” games and holds all the records for solving them. When his great uncle dies, this 12-year-old is joined by two friends in a real life escape the room mystery that could lead to a treasure lost since the end of WWII. Propelled by puzzles, character development, WWII historical intrigue, and a mysterious bad guy, Click Here to Start is a real page turner. Humor suspense and puzzles highlight this story.What's good: Adventure and mysteries that keep you guessing until the end.

             Mister Max (Series)
By Cynthia Voigt
This three book series follows young Max, a preteen left alone when his famous are kidnapped by and take overseas. Max shows his independence, maturity and intelligence by thriving on his own as the Solutioneer. He is essentially a private detective that focuses on solutions to issues rather than solving a crime. These books are chock full of setting descriptions, plot twists, character development and suspense. Each book stands on it's own but they definitely work best as a series. Even with the mysteries, suspense and adventure these stories remain light and airy – at least until you arrive at the second half of the last book. Then the story turns a bit dark in an exploration of totalitarianism and slavery. all three books will hold a young reader's attention and make them eager to read the next installment.
What's good: Interesting, characters, settings and a clear storytelling voice.

By Gordon Korman
            Korman brings his signature sense of humor to this
story about a 
true slacker, Cameron Boxer. He only
cares about one thing
 – gaming. Cameron is so
involved in gaming that he nearly burns his house
down while he's in it. It’s this pivotal event that
leads to the creation of a fictional school club –
Positive Action Group (PAG). Unfortunately for
Cameron the club soon becomes very real and
very popular.
            Told from multiple points of view, Korman
explores preteen and teen social structures,
motivations, friendships and more in this humor filled novel about life in a small town. 
Korman and Clements fans will not be disappointed.What's good: Humorous characters and fast-paced events.

Best for Ages 12 and Up

Lawless (Series)
By Jeffrey Salane
           The Lawless series follow teen M. Freeman as she heads to a
boarding school for spies  – evil spies  – then joins with a ragtag group of spies and misfits to save the world. And through it all M is trying to find out how her mother and father who passed away fit into everything that is unfolding around them. Suspend all sense of reality and enjoy. LawlessJustice and Mayhem are each fun reads on their own but, to emotionally invest in the characters you'll need to start your reading with book one. Mystery, action, danger and suspense keep the pages turning. Hold on tight and see of you can keep up with the plot twists.
            What's good: Fast-paced, unpredictable action with a touch of humor.

Your Presidential Fantasy Dream Team
By Daniel O’Brien | Illustrated by Winston Rowntree
            Who would you pick if you were assembling a dream team of
presidents to stave off a zombie apocalypse? That essentially
is the underlying theme to this original take on presidential
history. Daniel O’Brien hits a home run with this imaginative
book and keeps teens reading – and laughing – while they
learn about every president from George Washington to
Ronald Reagan. Sorry, no living presidents were included
in this edition so you will have to wait for another edition
to include Carter or any of the presidents after Reagan.
            What's good: Factual history wrapped in humor, sarcasm
and graphic novel-styled illustrations.

The Darkest Hour
By Caroline Tung Richmond
            It’s 1943 in Nazi-occupied France and a group of girls might be the best weapon the allies have. Covert Ops is a highly, top-secret organization of teen girls who were recruited to be spies for the allies. Based in Paris they infiltrate the enemy, gain valuable knowledge and remove threats if necessary. When the group gets wind of a Nazi plan that could change the course of the war, they jump into action. It's fast paced and fraught with danger. Double agents could be in play and when things begin going awry our 16-year-old heroine has to find a way to save the day – even after being captured.
            The Darkest Hour is a page turner with little downtime for breathing. The only drawback is a slightly rushed ending. If you like historical fiction and spy thrillers, this one is for you.
            What's good: Never a dull moment in this spy thriller.

            Running Girl
            By Simon Mason
            Garvie Smith is a highly-underachieving genius – crazy high IQ,
crazy low grades. Garvie doesn’t
see any point in attending
classes or doing pretty much anything else. But when his former
Chloe Dow, is found dead at a local pond he put's his
IQ to work solving the mystery. Seemingly a step ahead of the
police, Garvie is Sherlockian in 
his approach. Everything is a
puzzle that can be solved with logic and deduction.
peripheral characters such as the ultra-reserved
Sikh police detective and the hulking, Chloe-obsessed 
add depth, dimension and humor to this dark mystery. Grounded
in reality, the plot is suspenseful 
and full of twists that keep even the savviest readers guessing.Whats good: Smart, dry-witted dialogue wrapped around an engaging mystery. 

Thursday, October 29, 2015

Get Into the Spirit of Things

Here's the Sci-Fi, Paranormal & Fantasy You've Been Looking For

The Trap
By Steven Arntson
Best For, Boys: Ages 9 - 12
Rated 3.75 (ghosts, first crush, peril)

          Mystery, fantasy and paranormal adventures make this a good book for the Halloween season and beyond. Set in 1963 Farro, Idaho, this story covers friendship, civil rights, metaphysics and first crushes with an introspective and engaging narration. The story follows friends Henry, Helen, Alan and Nikki as the set out to find Alan’s older brother, who has been missing for several days. It's a haunting adventure that actually, in part, takes place in a cemetery. From out-of-body experiences to ghostly conversations The Trap keeps readers guessing about what will happen next.

What’s good: Believable middle school characters and a suspense-filled story.
What’s bad: The plotting is a little slow in the beginning, but picks up about midway though.

The Watchmen of Port Fayt
By Conrad Mason
Best For, Boys: Ages 8 - 12

Rated: 3.75 (pirates, fantasy creatures, violence)
          The Watchmen is a magical pirate-style adventure with echoes of Treasure Island and Harry Potter mixed into the fantasy soup. Set in the fantastical Carribean-like town of Port Fayt, the reader will find men and mythical creatures such as ogres, trolls, goblins and fairies walking the streets and doing business together. The Watchmen predominatley follows two main characters – Tabitha, the youngest member of the titular private police force; and Grubb, an orphaned half-goblin tavern boy who stumbles into a mysterious plot. This rollicking adventure pits them against corrupt militiamen, pirates, a weak governor and a very powerful witch who wants to destroy Port Fayt by raising the maw. As it happens, the Maw is a great and powerful sea beast worthy of an epic final battle. Get ready for a frenetically paced middle-grade fantasy that pirate fans should see as a winner.

What’s good: Pirates, magic fantasy and fast-paced adventure. Who could ask for more?
What’s bad: Sometimes difficult to follow due to the variety of characters and voices leading the reader through the story.

By Pam Munoz Ryan
Best For: Ages 10 - 14

Rated: 4.0 (intolerance, war, music)

          Echo is unlike any fairytale most young readers have read. Told through interconnected stories, it follows the journey of a magical harmonica into the hands of three young heroes. Friedrich in Germany, Mike in Pennsylvania, and Ivy in California each come into contact with the same instrument. Set just before and during WWII, the tale is more about the young heroes’ embodiment of bravery, tolerance and kindness as they stand up to injustice, rather than the harmonica. But the harmonic plays a key role as everything comes together in the final climactic section where Friedrich, Mike and Ivy attempt to write their own happy ending through the power of music.

What’s good: A great blend of storytelling – magic, mystery and history.
What’s bad: Slowly paced. Plus some preteens may balk at reading a fairytale.

Sunday, October 18, 2015

Here Be Monsters!

Looking for fun and spooky books?

“Leo: A Ghost Story”
By Mac Barnett
Illustrated by Christian Robinson
Best For: Ages 3 - 5
Rated: 3.00 (Friendship, Ghosts, Imagination)

To paraphrase Kermit the Frog, it’s not easy being a ghost. Leo has been alone a long time and all he really wants is a friend. But it’s difficult to make friends when you’re a ghost. When a new family moves into his house, Leo tries to be friendly, but the family wants nothing to do with him. So Leo sets out into the city in search of a friend. He wanders until he meets Jane, who has a big imagination and a very open heart. The two develop a close friendship as they play pretend. 
 Robinson adds emotion to the tale with simple yet powerful acrylic and pencil illustrations in somber tones. The retro-illustration style fits well with Mac Barnett’s honest and whimsical text. This is a well-constructed story of friendship and acceptance. Plus, it’s a fun way to ease children’s fears of the unknown.

What’s good: A strong message of open-mindedness and acceptance.
What’s bad: May lead to questions about life and death.

“Serafina and the Black Cloak”
By Robert Beatty
Best For, Girls: Ages 8 - 12
Rated: 3.5 (Mystery, Friendship, Paranormal, Biltmore Estate)

            Set on the Biltmore Estate in Asheville, NC, this creepy fantasy-adventure draws you in and keeps you on the edge of your seat from one page to the next. It’s 1899 and although Serafina’s dad is a custodian on the estate, he and his daughter are seldom seen or heard. They keep to themselves, living secretly in the mansion’s basement. Serafina has unique golden eyes and an uncanny ability to stalk and catch rats. Her father is very loving but never allows her to be seen by the Vanderbilt family and continually warns her to stay out of the forest surrounding the grounds. 
            Things change when a figure in a dark cloak begins kidnapping children who are visiting the estate. Serafina defies her father and befriends Braeden, the Vanderbilt’s nephew. Together, they set out to solve this dark and enchanting mystery. Strangely, each clue also brings her closer to discovering the truth about herself. Fans of spooky tales and mysteries will find satisfaction between the covers Serafina and the Black Cloak.

What’s good: Serafina is an engaging and intriguing heroine that makes you want to know more.
What’s bad: The kidnappings may be a little too graphic for some readers.

By Ronald L. Smith
Best For, Boys: Ages 9 – 13
Rated: 3.5 (Deep South, Witchcraft, Race, Friendship) 

This spiritually-charged, Southern gothic tale has it all – mystery, first love, magic, action, fantasy and horror. Set in 1930s Alabama, this tale is told in the distinctive voice of the titular character, Hoodoo Hatcher. He’s a 12-year-old boy that lives with his grandmother, because both his mother and father have passed away. 
Witchcraft is commonplace in Hoodoo's neck of the woods. But odd things get even odder when a fortune teller warns him about a stranger. She tells Hoodoo that only he can save himself and his people. 
Hints of racial hardships are blended with religion and family values. Somehow it all seems to mingle well with mojo bags and magical potions. Hoodoo is a mystical battle of good and evil that is definitely worth reading during the Halloween season.

What’s good: Great voice and style that makes you want to keep reading.
What’s bad: Some small pacing issues, but they’re easy to look past.

Sunday, September 27, 2015

Read Aloud. Read Often.

Consider these new books for your next story time.

“There’s No Such Thing as Little”
By LeUyen Pham
Best For: Ages 4 - 8
Rated: 3.00 (Inspiration, Children, Positivity)
Best-selling illustrator of Freckleface Strawberry, LeUyen Pham sets an optimistic tone from the first page of her book, There’s No Such thing as Little. Using the simple die-cut circle technique in every other set of illustrations, Pham is able to show one perception then reveal the truth in the very next illustration. I particularly like the reading/writing pages that say, “A little letter? No, an important letter.” I also like the trip to the museum with, “A little line? No, and inspiring line.” Pham’s positive message is enhanced by the contingent of smiling children smattered throughout the pages.

What’s good: Nice message  focuses on finding joy in life's simple pleasures . 
What’s bad: Very little. This book would be great for kindergarten story time.

“Home Tweet Home”
By Courtney Dicmas
Best For: Ages 3 – 7
Rated: 2.75 (Family, Home, Animals)

Home Tweet Home follows a traditional story telling technique that even young readers will recognize from books such as The Grouchy Ladybug and Are You My Mother? Big brother and sister cave swallow are getting bigger and older. Now they’re tired of sharing a crowded nest with their large family. So they go in search of a better place to live. What they find – a kangaroo’s pouch, the coils of snake, and many other uncomfortable animal backs – leaves them wondering why no place feels like home. I’m sure you can guess where they end up.

What’s good: The vibrant illustrations are great for picture walks with early readers.
What’s bad:
It doesn’t make sense that all of the nest's locations involve the backs of other animals.

“Use your Words, Sophie!
By Rosemary Wells
Best For, Girls: Ages 3 - 7
Rated: 2.5 (New Baby, Language, Jealousy)

If you’re familiar with Rosemary Wells, this book will seem familiar. It is her third featuring Sophie. Use your Words, Sophie! follows Sophie as she tries to cope with a new baby in the family. She draws attention to herself by making up her own language. Using made-up words causes her parents more consternation than necessary – especially when the new baby begins crying. Granny helps Sophie become the family hero by show her how the made-up words are just the remedy for crying fits. Sophie calms the baby and decides the baby's name before the story ends. Young readers will enjoy the humor and the comfortable illustrations.

What’s good: Humor and emotions that are easy for young readers to understand.
What’s bad: This is a tried and true subject matter and Wells doesn’t add much beyond what is already out there.

Tuesday, September 1, 2015

New Picture Books Focus on Friends

Little Elliot, Big City
            By Mike Curato
            Best for, Girls: Ages 4 - 8
            Rated: 2.75 (Friendship, Feelings of inadequacy)

            Fans of Melrose and Croc will find some similarities in Little Elliot, Big City. Both stories focus on anthropomorphic animals living alongside humans. In this case, Elliot is a small polka dotted elephant living in 1940’s New York City. He feels alone and left out until he meets a small white mouse. They form a fast friendship and work together to accomplish everything they felt they were too small to do when they were alone. This tale is a pretty straight-forward message of friendship and adventure in a big city. Children will relate to feeling different from those around them and the safety they feel among friends.

What’s good: The illustrations are sophisticated without losing their childish appeal.
What’s bad: Boys may find this book a little too sweet for their tastes.

Izzy & Oscar
By Allison Estes and Dan Stark
Illustrated by Tracy Dockray
Best For: Ages 4 – 8
Rated: 3 (Friendship, Imagination, Pets)

This summer adventure opens as Izzy and her friends embark on a pirate treasure hunt. Izzy is the captain of the surly crew, but some of her friends wonder how she can be a good pirate captain without a pet. Every pirate has a pet and as Izzy and her crew find the spot marked with an X they also find Izzy’s pet. It’s a purple octopus named Oscar. It’s certainly an unorthodox pet which adds to the humor when he sits on her shoulder or they go for a walk. As Oscar grows Izzy knows it would be best if her Octopus were back in the sea. But before they can get to the ocean they find a far better place for Oscar – as the lifeguard in their community pool. It’s a ridiculous tale of friendship, pets and great adventure – perfect for the last days of summer.

What’s good: Filled with humorous situations and likable illustrations.
What’s bad:
Children should understand the absurdity of an octopus as a pet, but who knows?

Orion and the Dark
By Emma Yarlett
Best For: Ages 4 - 8
Rated: 3.5 (Fears, Imagination, Friendship)

Some kids find the dark a scary thing, while others look at it as a big adventure. Orion and the Dark gives readers a bit of both philosophies. Although Orion’s parents tell him there is nothing to be afraid of, he sees the world as full of frightening things. The dark is at the top of the list until one night when Dark pays Orion a little visit. This friendly-ish looking creature takes Orion an adventure in the night – bouncing on beds and flying through space. Dark explains how sounds that seem scary in the night are easily explained in the light. By the end of their adventure Orion understands that Dark can be his friend and he’s not afraid of friends. It’s a great tale for children a little shy of the dark.

What’s good: Wonderful illustrations that will keep children and their parents staring at the pages.
What’s bad: Even with its friendly form, the idea that the dark can come to life may be off-putting to some children.